I really like the melody and progression for this so far. It feels like its building to something epic. If you plan on adding to this I think you could have fun with some DnB double time, just a thought. Nice Track!
Haha, maybe I'll extend the song and go into a faster section. Honestly I hadn't really thought about it, but now that you mention it that sounds like a pretty cool idea. Thanks for the kind review!
1:17 to the end sounds amazing and I wish you would go back into the 1:17 melody at 2:33 and add more to the song. I wasn't a fan of the beginning though. I felt it was going in a different direction. I would try to make the two parts mesh a little better and perhaps get to that 1:17 melody a little sooner. That's just my two cents though. Overall I enjoyed the song.
Very Ominous. I like the ideas you had with this one and the mastering sounds pretty good to me. It felt a little slow however throughout the song. When the drums kicked in I was expecting a more DnB double time feel. Perhaps adding more percussion variation at a double time pace could help the intensity of the song. Also I would recommend adding more ambient sounds to the background to fill in some of the empty space and add to that ominous atmosphere and assist in some of the transitions. Overall, I thought it sounded pretty good and it has a lot of potential.
To be honest I had no idea what I wanted to with this song lol and I do agree with it being slow originally I was going to make this version a dnb song (had gotten started on it and everything) but I wanted to try experiment with some things.
Thank you for the review it was very helpful. :)
Very Erie (In a good way)
I can definitely picture this in a video game somewhere dark, like a creepy dungeon or cavern. I really liked the melody progression throughout the whole song. You kept the beat interesting throughout the whole piece and the use of fx's was great. I felt a sense of urgency as well as a "heaviness" listening to this song(if that makes sense) which makes it easy for me to imagine that I'm lost in a dungeon and I want to get out! The only thing I would say to improve would possibly be to increase the bass volume slightly in some areas where it feels like its getting drowned out by all the other sounds just to add a little more of that heaviness. That's just my opinion though. Overall great loop!
Very nice melody control. There were a lot of changes throughout the piece but i never felt 'lost' (guess i made it through the maze lol). The sounds/melodies are all excellent as usual. You never fail to disappoint!
I have been coming to this page for the past 4 years in hopes of finding another amazing track by the legendary Dimrain47 who inspired me to begin writing electronic music and for 4 years i had failed....BUT NO LONGER!!!!!
Godly Track, Welcome Back, 5/5 10/10(f*ck the stars) +1 download.
Hope to hear more greatness from you.
If an eargasm could last 5 minutes...
This is pretty damn close to what it would sound like.
Simple yet addictive main melody
The background arps and strings really added to the song
That synth at 2:34 fits the atmosphere of the song perfectly.
That groove section at 4:16 was absolutely amazing.
Only thing I can critique is I thought your transition to the ending was a little too quick at 4:41.
Overall superb song! I would pay money to listen to this.
And you're lucky, I'm not intending to make my songs paid for quite a while.
I'm glad you liked the song. Yea, I kind of agree that I should have put a bit more effort into the ending, maybe make it break down slower.
But thanks for the review! Greatly appreciated!
Very nice atmosphere with this song and good sound choice. Only thing I would suggest is perhaps lowering the frequency of the percs. occasionally to give them a more "distanced" feel. I think that would allow the melody to be heard more and add to the peaceful ambiance. Another great song.
Very Nice Work
I'm surprised that you could get a track of this quality using only the demo version of FL Studio.
I like the atmosphere you create with this track as well as the melodies you used.
Also good call on the sub-background. It fills out the sound nicely.
Only thing I would suggest working on is making the ending softer and less abrupt.
keep up the good work,
Thanks! I have the registered version of FL Studio, I was just talking about Maximus being a demo. Jeez if I had to create this in one sitting I'd go insane haha :) Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
The Intro piano melody was very creative and soothing, The clap was very well mastered and overall feel of the song was calming and peaceful.
Also the name suits the song well.
Another great track,
Thanks a lot man, I'm really glad you liked it! Also, I'm really glad you think the name suits well^^
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
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